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Friday, October 31, 2008

ye andhera...

sakhi,
ye andhera..
meri parchhayin..
nigal gaya....
ek toonth
daba hua hai...
mujhme..
na usse dhoop
lagne deta hai....
na sawan ki
bauchaar...
panapne hi nahi deta.
mere andar kuchh....

toonth ki jadh
katthi hoon...
par avsesh
chooth jata
hai sakhi...
(swayam se haar
jati hoon..)

andhera chadar sa
toonth ko lapete
hai...
toonth ki
badhti jadhon ki..
main abhyasth
ho chuki hoon...

sakhi,
ye andhera...
beet jaye .....bas..
naye din ka
intzaar hai mujhe...
toonth to
mujhih mein rahega...
hameshaa....
(mujhe pata hai)...

2 comments:

Sajal Ehsaas said...

chhote chhote sentences waala ye style aapka jam gaya hai ekdum...ispe kaam jaari rakhiye aise hi

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Kavya!! said...

Really Emotional....bahut saari bhawanao ko samete huye tumhare apne alag style wale poems me ise "masterpiece" kehna atishyokti na hogi...at times ur poems really makes me wonder---how do u feel sp deeply and express those feelings that beautifully and more I wonder,more amazed I find myself...really liked this creation of urs...well done!! :-)